Free writing

It was really fun in the weekends because I was in the christmas parade.The sun was streaming down really hard on my back I had felt that I was sunburnt but I did'nt because I had but heaps of sunblock on .The float I was on was for the city library.I got to hand out lolies to the people.As I was walking along I saw luce and grace. As soon as I saw them I quickly stuck both of my hands into the bag and gave them to great huge handfuls of lollies.By then I had got to carried away that I was way behind our float.I had to run as fast as I could to catch up with my float.

My time at Riverdale school recount

I Have Really enjoyed my years at Riverdale School. On the first day of school I was really nervous to start but on the second day I had settled in really well and had made a lot of Friends with the help of my wonder full teacher. Riverdale has given me a lot of opportunities and has made me work harder to achieve my goals. I will really miss Riverdale but will look forward to starting intermediate.I really think Riverdale is a cool school.

Recount of athletics day

It was a beautiful day. The sun was streaming down against the red rough hurdles track.The day had finally come.The day of the Riverdale schools athletics.

My heart pounding as I take a very slow step to the start line with a feeling of nervousness. Then suddenly I hear a deep booming voice. It was Mr Bron. I lift my head up and I listen to his words. "Take your marks,get set," toot!


I take one foot of the start line and I start to race as fast as I can. "I'm doing well, I'm doing well," I say to myself. I see Ansley and Kate infront of me, but I still know that Charlotte is still behind me. My heart pounds even harder as I run faster and faster to try and catch up with Kate. By now I am tying with Kate but then she slips ahead of me and thats the race over I pass the finish line.

"Ohhhh bad luck," I say to myself. I would've made it throught to the finals but I had finished in 3rd place. I feel a little rush of anger run up my spine, but then I got over it.

WALT: Write dialogue

"I'm having the last lollie!" I said excitedly.
" NO! I said I was going to have it first," My sister yelled.
" No I did," I yell back.
"Well I'm bigger and stronger than you which is why I should get the last lollie,"
" So it doesn't matter about that," My sister says.

Argument or debate

I can still remember the day my family and I were at Animates. Today mum had given my sister and me the opportunity to choose a pet. While we were walking down the aisle of pets we saw tweeting birds meowing cats and barking dogs. I knew this was going to be hard to choose. After hours of thinking my sister and I had chosen the pet was going to be a dog. But what breed of dog? Was it going to be tall,short,plump or skinny. Right at the end of the dog aisle, I had found a small golden retriever, but on the other side of the aisle my sister had found a very woolly, fluffy white furred poodle. But still I wanted the golden retriever. My sister and I were fighting over which one to get. In the end my sister and I didn't agree with each other so dad got to choose the pet. Dad chose two guinea pigs. They were both girls.One was as blackn as the night sky with sparkling green eyes, and the other one was brown with white patches. We really enjoyed the guinea pigs, but after three years of having them we gave them to our cousins.

Writing Moderation

Whoah Whoa! come on come on I can reach Mr Snuggles nearly there very nearly there come on come on I can do it oh no I cant.Woof woof I turn my head round and see Aunt Carolines dogs heading straight for the stool that I am standing on.My hands clenched tightly to the shelf of Aunt Carolines bookcase.The dogs still chasing each other and getting even closer to the stool, finally I feel a great huge THUD! and with all that shock my hands slip asI fall to the ground.I look up and this what I saw... very slowly one by one the books from the book shelf come tumbling down on me. AAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!! I scream closing my eyes as tightly as I possibly could.Once all of the books had landed on top of me I got up and I started crying.I had grazes and dents all over my body . That's the mark where the books had landed on me.OH! are you okay darling said Aunt Caroline as she picked me up and asked me what had happened.I told her the story and she gave me mr snuggles back and told me next time to ever climb shelves.So I listened and since then I have never climbed shelves again.

scary story

I was just happily walking along the Manawatu river with my mum, dad and little sister when suddenly a creamy,brown pitbull came out from nowhere and started running straight my way.

I was so terrified. I was thinking lots of different things like, was he gonna bite me? or was he gonna run straight into me and knock me over.Well I didn't know what the dog was going to do.

I picked up a stick from the ground and held it out in front of me.I ran back to dad and grabbed onto his leg as tightly as I possibly could. I turned round to look at the pitbull... and there it was it was right there in front of my face with it's mouth wide open.I quickly whipped my face the other way so I couldn't see it's grotty teeth inside it's huge mouth.I was breathing very hard and could not stop thinking of what might happen next.I kept my eyes shut until dad said that the dog had gone.

So I opened my eyes and I saw that the owner of the dog was talking to my dad and the dog was on it's leash which was being held by it's owner.After that very terrifying experience I am now scared of dogs, especially pitbulls.