The Art of describing

The wind blew. John got cold. - 'Rustle, rustle' as the leaves circled around Johns cold feet.The wind was getting stronger everytime John took a step on the cold, hard floor.He could feel ghostly fingers tickling his feet while John's goosebumps were coming out of his skin like he had never seen before.

By Nathalie
LC13 :)

My descriptive writing

HeLLo My name is ACIDIBLLY and I am a alien.I have slimy, goopy, green skin the same colour as my boogies,which is like a tree greenish colour.I have three eyes,my eye at the left side of my head is the eye I had bloodshot on when my someone had left a knife on the floor......... when SUDDENLY!!!! I stood on it and it flicked up through the air and landed straight in my eye.OUCHHHHHH!!!!!!! I shouted and screamed for the rest of the day.Anyway that was then.My middle eye is black and my right eye had turned orange when I was sleeping.It was just a really random moment.I have no feet so I get around with my slimy skin that smoothly slides across the floor and that's what makes me move.I have no freinds because the other aliens think that I'm very scary and I have no family either because I hatched out of a dry,hard piece of gloop so that's how I got my gloopy skin.I love to slide around in the sticky oozy mud.I only eat cheese because it's my favourite food and I also love to drink caterpillar guts with a little dash of lemon and cinnamon.I've got to go and have my cocraoach bath now.So enjoy the rest of your goopy day.or should I say gloopy day.BYE!!


By Nathalie
LC13