Free writing

It was really fun in the weekends because I was in the christmas parade.The sun was streaming down really hard on my back I had felt that I was sunburnt but I did'nt because I had but heaps of sunblock on .The float I was on was for the city library.I got to hand out lolies to the people.As I was walking along I saw luce and grace. As soon as I saw them I quickly stuck both of my hands into the bag and gave them to great huge handfuls of lollies.By then I had got to carried away that I was way behind our float.I had to run as fast as I could to catch up with my float.

My time at Riverdale school recount

I Have Really enjoyed my years at Riverdale School. On the first day of school I was really nervous to start but on the second day I had settled in really well and had made a lot of Friends with the help of my wonder full teacher. Riverdale has given me a lot of opportunities and has made me work harder to achieve my goals. I will really miss Riverdale but will look forward to starting intermediate.I really think Riverdale is a cool school.

Recount of athletics day

It was a beautiful day. The sun was streaming down against the red rough hurdles track.The day had finally come.The day of the Riverdale schools athletics.

My heart pounding as I take a very slow step to the start line with a feeling of nervousness. Then suddenly I hear a deep booming voice. It was Mr Bron. I lift my head up and I listen to his words. "Take your marks,get set," toot!


I take one foot of the start line and I start to race as fast as I can. "I'm doing well, I'm doing well," I say to myself. I see Ansley and Kate infront of me, but I still know that Charlotte is still behind me. My heart pounds even harder as I run faster and faster to try and catch up with Kate. By now I am tying with Kate but then she slips ahead of me and thats the race over I pass the finish line.

"Ohhhh bad luck," I say to myself. I would've made it throught to the finals but I had finished in 3rd place. I feel a little rush of anger run up my spine, but then I got over it.

WALT: Write dialogue

"I'm having the last lollie!" I said excitedly.
" NO! I said I was going to have it first," My sister yelled.
" No I did," I yell back.
"Well I'm bigger and stronger than you which is why I should get the last lollie,"
" So it doesn't matter about that," My sister says.

Argument or debate

I can still remember the day my family and I were at Animates. Today mum had given my sister and me the opportunity to choose a pet. While we were walking down the aisle of pets we saw tweeting birds meowing cats and barking dogs. I knew this was going to be hard to choose. After hours of thinking my sister and I had chosen the pet was going to be a dog. But what breed of dog? Was it going to be tall,short,plump or skinny. Right at the end of the dog aisle, I had found a small golden retriever, but on the other side of the aisle my sister had found a very woolly, fluffy white furred poodle. But still I wanted the golden retriever. My sister and I were fighting over which one to get. In the end my sister and I didn't agree with each other so dad got to choose the pet. Dad chose two guinea pigs. They were both girls.One was as blackn as the night sky with sparkling green eyes, and the other one was brown with white patches. We really enjoyed the guinea pigs, but after three years of having them we gave them to our cousins.

Writing Moderation

Whoah Whoa! come on come on I can reach Mr Snuggles nearly there very nearly there come on come on I can do it oh no I cant.Woof woof I turn my head round and see Aunt Carolines dogs heading straight for the stool that I am standing on.My hands clenched tightly to the shelf of Aunt Carolines bookcase.The dogs still chasing each other and getting even closer to the stool, finally I feel a great huge THUD! and with all that shock my hands slip asI fall to the ground.I look up and this what I saw... very slowly one by one the books from the book shelf come tumbling down on me. AAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!! I scream closing my eyes as tightly as I possibly could.Once all of the books had landed on top of me I got up and I started crying.I had grazes and dents all over my body . That's the mark where the books had landed on me.OH! are you okay darling said Aunt Caroline as she picked me up and asked me what had happened.I told her the story and she gave me mr snuggles back and told me next time to ever climb shelves.So I listened and since then I have never climbed shelves again.

scary story

I was just happily walking along the Manawatu river with my mum, dad and little sister when suddenly a creamy,brown pitbull came out from nowhere and started running straight my way.

I was so terrified. I was thinking lots of different things like, was he gonna bite me? or was he gonna run straight into me and knock me over.Well I didn't know what the dog was going to do.

I picked up a stick from the ground and held it out in front of me.I ran back to dad and grabbed onto his leg as tightly as I possibly could. I turned round to look at the pitbull... and there it was it was right there in front of my face with it's mouth wide open.I quickly whipped my face the other way so I couldn't see it's grotty teeth inside it's huge mouth.I was breathing very hard and could not stop thinking of what might happen next.I kept my eyes shut until dad said that the dog had gone.

So I opened my eyes and I saw that the owner of the dog was talking to my dad and the dog was on it's leash which was being held by it's owner.After that very terrifying experience I am now scared of dogs, especially pitbulls.

Free Writing

Phew that was a good game for our morning fitness it was a lot of running we had to do i was a defender all the time so i did'nt have to do as much running as the attackers. Oh!! I did'nt get into intermediate normal that sucks but i still have a fair chance of getting into there . If i still don't get into intermediate normal i will probably go to LAC.

SHOWTIME!!!!!

W.A.L.T : put it all together

PLAN!!!

Had to get dressed quickly, was in such a rush, had no time to sit down, thought I had lost my things, was in a small squishy dressing room, the dressing room was all hot and very stuffy, we did'nt have to share a dressing room with the boys, I was panicking.

Writing!!!

OH NO!!! I've only got one song to get dressed and ready for Halloween and the dressing room is really hot and stuffy.

I quickly tug my hideous Halloween costume on and rush to the black silky wings were I could see people already lining up to go on stage. OK finally the dance is finished now I have to go and rush into my black box costume.

OK now I've got to take my sparkly sewed-on sequin headband off and find my hairbrush.OH NO!!!! where is my hairbrush????? I search through my bag.AH HA !!! found you . Now I've got to tie my hair up into a high ponytail.Where's my sequin hair tie??? PHEW!! I'm ready now.

I rush back downstairs and wait in the wings.PHEW!!! I'm just in time to dance.

W.A.L.T put it all together.

Bad weather in the weekends.

Brainstorming words : I couldn't go outside, I was bored, It was raining hard out, nothing to do, I sat down and read my book, The thunder was making my ears sore and hard for me to concentrate on my book,

My simille I'm going to use: as loud as a stampede of elephants rushing to get their breakfast.

I'M SOOOOO BORED!!!! The rain was pouring down really hard out.I was bored so I sat down to read my very interesting book.It was called geronimo stilton and the kingdom of fantasy.SUDDENLY..... BANG!!!!! What was that??? Oh it's just thunder. I went back to reading my book.By now the thunder was getting louder and louder it was as loud as a stampede of elephants rushing to get their breakfast.I stopped reading my book and stared out the window.On the road I had seen all the leaves and the flowers that had been washed away by the heavy rain.It was very deep.I put my raincoat on and walked downstairs to the garage and had seen that the water had flooded the garage.I saw soggy wet cardboard boxes and wet storage.I went over to the wall and I could see how high the wild water had gone.It was incredebly high!!!

W.A.L.T make tired writing come to life.

It was the night of Halloween.The sound of black bats and vampires made Emily's legs turn to jelly as she fell to the hard concrete footpath. Emily got up and she tiptoed fearfully and slowly into the dusky dark spooky haunted house that was standing right beside her.It's roof was all ripped and fallen apart it looked like it had red bloodshot eyes.Shivers came trembling down Emily's boney spine as she slowly crept closer and closer inside the house. Emily reached into her brand new purple Kathmandu rucksack for her girly pink torch but suddenly................. she felt ghostly fingers creeping up her arm which made her freeze to a sudden stop.

Shaking Earth

Why were there no deaths in such a big earthquake?
There were no deaths because it was sooo strong that people felt it so they got out quick enough to avoid themselves from being hit by things and to avoid death so that is why there were no deaths in the christchurch earthquake.
Backround information:
The major and powerful 7.1 earthquake smashed buildings, cracked roads and twisted railway tracks around Christchurch.At least 500 buildings, including 90 properties in Christchurch have been destroyed in the earthquake that happened at 4:35 a.m. on Saturday in the region of Canterbury.The earthquake shattered glass and made chimneys and walls of older buildings crumble onto the ground. The prime minister said it was a miracle no one was killed.Roger Bates, whose dairy farm at Darfield was close to the earthquake's epicenter he said the new fault line had ripped up the surface across his land. The earthquake is about the same size as the Haiti earthquake but the damage is not as bad because the houses in haiti were badly built.

Christchurch fireman Mike Bowden said haeps of people had been trapped in buildings by fallen chimneys and blocked entrances. Rescue teams with sniffer dogs are continuing to check the houses.They reckon there were 100 after shocks. Parked cars were crushed by heaps of falling bricks. There were two men who were badly injured, one man was crushed by a chimmney and the other guy was badly cut by falling glass but they did not die.

Free writing

Sad faces coming from the city of christchurch when the major earthquake struck at 4:35 on saturday morning .Badly injured people rushing to the hospital.Houses collapsed or badly damaged.
After the major earhquake there were 100 after shocks. Hopefully people will get their houses back and live a good life again. Just hoping there won't be another major earhquake as big as this one or even another one again.

Free Writing

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Free writing

I HATE PEAS AND BRUSSEL SPROUTS I HATE PEAS AND BRUSSEL SPROUTS I LIKE CARROTS I LIKE CARROTS I HATE PEAS AND BRUSSEL SPROUTS I HATE PEAS AND BRUSSEL SPROUTS I LIKE CARROTS I LIKE CARROTS I LIKE LETTUCE I LIKE LETTUCE
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Word for a word

The boys ran quickly to ghostieland.
Change the nouns.

1. The girls ran quickly to candyland.
2. The man ran quickly to the bike shop.
3. The dog ran quickly to the bone.

Free Writing

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Free Writing

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Free Writing

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Free writing

yes yes yes yes we bet parkvale ath the a grade netball in the first and second quarter we were loosing by three or four points we were so ditermind to win and our team hates loosing in the end we won against the an the score was nine seven to us we were so happy to win our match after my game finished i went over to watch the rugby they were playing full on there was only one girl in the whole match and that was niamh from riverdale she was playing hard out but she was really good at rugby i think she was even better than some of the boys from both teams then i went over to watch the soccer but i only saw the last goal and guess who scored that goal it was soap real name sophie

Free writing

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Free writing

hihhihihihihihihihih ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm da da da hi what are you doing today i love movie world its so awesome i would love to go there againi reckon its gonna be a fun day at school today we dont have to do fitness today so thats great yay we get to do delightfull dancing with dean today i hope we do fun things at schoool today imgoing to maake another sock puppet in the weekends i loved kates pi on puppets i wonder what my next pi will be on my eyes have gon blurry im weired flash flash flash lights camera action i like riding horses therie so fun to ride on unless you fall off that really hurts

Free Writing

hi hi hi what are you doing today lets go to movie world what did you watch on telly last night ummm im weired so do you want to come to my house today horses are cool i wonder what my pi is on i havent decided yet i think its gonna be soooo cool im going to stand by the heater i hope i win the quiz

Free writing

hi what are you doing today i love macaroni and cheese lets go to the park dolphins are cool ummmmmmmmmm omg i see a caterpillar ohhhh look at that tree bkwhfjebfhbghghy3gh3bgfth34hjgftqehjr b3jbvg i dont know whta to say ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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My Puppet Play

WALT:Write a play using a play format.
Weired day at school.
By Nathalie Sasha

Characters:

Sally Superhero
Emily
Tanzy
Greg


Scene: A Classroom.Greg is teaching the class.Sally superhero is flying about in the classroom not doing her work. Tanzy is typing away on the computer keys. Emily is arguing with the teacher.


Greg and Emily: (Arguing) blahblahblahblahblahblah.
Sally: wheeeeeeeee!
Tanzy: (typing away on the computer and laughing as she types)
Greg and Emily: (stop arguing and walk away from each other)
Emily: I HATE YOU MR GREG! ( starts crying)
Greg: We'll see about that!
Tanzy: What is going on round here??
Sally :zzzzooooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!! (crashes into the classroom door)
Greg: I've had enough of this nonsense! (walks out the door)
Tanzy: oooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ( with arms out and legs crossed)I wish I was in a different world. oooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.
Emily: What are you doing??
Tanzy: uuu uu mm noth ing.
Sally : (sally comes in) OWWWWWWWW! My head hurts.
Greg: Well you shouldn't have been silly the first time.
Tanzy: (goes back to the computer and taps away on the computer keys again)
Emily: Seya I'm outta here. (walks out)
Sally: Yep sounds about right! (walks out the other direction)
Greg: Yer seya I'm going! ( Walks out too)
Tanzy: wait! what have I done? I haven't done anything! (starts crying and then walks out)


The End

My Puppet

My puppets name is Sally Superhero.She is a superhero and she likes to save people and sort out problems.Her favourite food is Macaroni and Cheese and her favourite drink is Juggling, juicy jellybean juice.She is a very happy kind of puppet and she is never mean.She loves animals but she hates Balloons .Sally superhero always wears her golden cape which has the initials of her name on it. She has very pretty hair the colour of a peacock with very googly eyes and wears a fluffy black face mask over her eyes.

The Art of describing

The wind blew. John got cold. - 'Rustle, rustle' as the leaves circled around Johns cold feet.The wind was getting stronger everytime John took a step on the cold, hard floor.He could feel ghostly fingers tickling his feet while John's goosebumps were coming out of his skin like he had never seen before.

By Nathalie
LC13 :)

My descriptive writing

HeLLo My name is ACIDIBLLY and I am a alien.I have slimy, goopy, green skin the same colour as my boogies,which is like a tree greenish colour.I have three eyes,my eye at the left side of my head is the eye I had bloodshot on when my someone had left a knife on the floor......... when SUDDENLY!!!! I stood on it and it flicked up through the air and landed straight in my eye.OUCHHHHHH!!!!!!! I shouted and screamed for the rest of the day.Anyway that was then.My middle eye is black and my right eye had turned orange when I was sleeping.It was just a really random moment.I have no feet so I get around with my slimy skin that smoothly slides across the floor and that's what makes me move.I have no freinds because the other aliens think that I'm very scary and I have no family either because I hatched out of a dry,hard piece of gloop so that's how I got my gloopy skin.I love to slide around in the sticky oozy mud.I only eat cheese because it's my favourite food and I also love to drink caterpillar guts with a little dash of lemon and cinnamon.I've got to go and have my cocraoach bath now.So enjoy the rest of your goopy day.or should I say gloopy day.BYE!!


By Nathalie
LC13

Autumn

'Rustle,rustle' as I hear the Autumn leaves blowing in the breezy wind.Red,orange,yellow and brown leaves falling gently onto the cold autumn's floor.'Crunch,crunch as I step onto the leaves.I can feel the leaves veins massaging the bottom of my feet as I walk through the forest. I pick up a leaf and rub it underneath my nose, it smells like lawn clippings.The leaf also has five fingers and it reminds me of snowflakes and the Canada flag.Lots of different leaves falling of the trees,some sharp with rigid bits at the end and some as smooth as silk.Some with holes in them were caterpillars have bitten into or even other bugs.Getting to the end of the forest I see a squirrel gnawing into it's nuts.

People of the silk road

The man living the terrible life in Afganistan.Old with wrinkles nobody to look after him and just one knife and that was the only prop he had besides one pair of pants,one t-shirt and one turban.Went to some kind of dangerous and lonley forest out of nowhere and shaved the skin off a grey possum and used it to keep himself warm.Has no house and just lives on the ground.

My cross country training.

WALT:DESCRIBE

GO!! shouts Mrs Kenyon shouts everyone sprints as hard as they can,I don't know why but they just do.I know they're going to get puffed straight away and that's because they're not pacing themselves.My goal for today is to pace myself and that's what i'm doing right now.Around the tree and down the big hill. WEEEEEEEEEE! I say as I run down the steep hill past the cone. Yes! I get to put a counter in the bucket that means i have done 1 lap.Now im on my 2nd lap.Still pacing myself I feel myself turning as red as a tomato.'PUFF PUFF PUFF' as I run my 3rd lap passing 16 people I run around the big tree again and I go onto my 4th lap.'STOPPPP' shouts Mrs Kenyon. Huh, finally. That was a good cross country run.

Mrs Walker the Jump jam instructor

WALT: describe with voice

' FIVE,FOUR,THREE,TWO,ONE BOOM as the stereo plays as loud as it can to tune the whole room with the energetic loud thunder birds music. 'High arms' Mrs Walker shouts at the top of her voice as she dances her head of while the sweat runs down her shiny tanned neck like a waterfall that had been stopped for 10 whole days.Come forward she says with expression using her hand gestures. At the end of her hands are sharp nails they are as sharp as a lions claws. Now it's my favourite part. Time for the disco move.'WOW look at her musceles she looks as strong as a gorilla.So thats Mrs Walker the Jump Jam instructor.

My sea adventure

‘Splash’ as I jump into the sparkling shimmering water. Now our underwater adventure begins. ‘OH LOOK’ there are some black and orange striped nemo fish.They are so beautiful. What’s that in the distance I can see something gold and sparkly shimmering on the oceon’s surface . I swim closer to take a good look. ‘Oh my gosh it’s a treasure box at the bottom of the golden glittery sand, and it’s already open. This so cool my heart is beating as fast as a cheetah running. I swim even closer to the treasure box and take out all of the shiny gold coins and all the valuable jewellery and take them with me while I explore the rest of the oceon. I put the the jewellery around my neck and around my wrist and carry on swimming. I see some pink furry anemones on the oceon ground. I think it’s about time I come out from the water now. So I swim to the surface of the water and hop out.'WOW' That was the best diving experience ever.