Monday, November 29, 2010

WALT: Write dialogue

"I'm having the last lollie!" I said excitedly.
" NO! I said I was going to have it first," My sister yelled.
" No I did," I yell back.
"Well I'm bigger and stronger than you which is why I should get the last lollie,"
" So it doesn't matter about that," My sister says.

Thursday, November 11, 2010

Argument or debate

I can still remember the day my family and I were at Animates. Today mum had given my sister and me the opportunity to choose a pet. While we were walking down the aisle of pets we saw tweeting birds meowing cats and barking dogs. I knew this was going to be hard to choose. After hours of thinking my sister and I had chosen the pet was going to be a dog. But what breed of dog? Was it going to be tall,short,plump or skinny. Right at the end of the dog aisle, I had found a small golden retriever, but on the other side of the aisle my sister had found a very woolly, fluffy white furred poodle. But still I wanted the golden retriever. My sister and I were fighting over which one to get. In the end my sister and I didn't agree with each other so dad got to choose the pet. Dad chose two guinea pigs. They were both girls.One was as blackn as the night sky with sparkling green eyes, and the other one was brown with white patches. We really enjoyed the guinea pigs, but after three years of having them we gave them to our cousins.