Writing Moderation

Whoah Whoa! come on come on I can reach Mr Snuggles nearly there very nearly there come on come on I can do it oh no I cant.Woof woof I turn my head round and see Aunt Carolines dogs heading straight for the stool that I am standing on.My hands clenched tightly to the shelf of Aunt Carolines bookcase.The dogs still chasing each other and getting even closer to the stool, finally I feel a great huge THUD! and with all that shock my hands slip asI fall to the ground.I look up and this what I saw... very slowly one by one the books from the book shelf come tumbling down on me. AAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!! I scream closing my eyes as tightly as I possibly could.Once all of the books had landed on top of me I got up and I started crying.I had grazes and dents all over my body . That's the mark where the books had landed on me.OH! are you okay darling said Aunt Caroline as she picked me up and asked me what had happened.I told her the story and she gave me mr snuggles back and told me next time to ever climb shelves.So I listened and since then I have never climbed shelves again.

scary story

I was just happily walking along the Manawatu river with my mum, dad and little sister when suddenly a creamy,brown pitbull came out from nowhere and started running straight my way.

I was so terrified. I was thinking lots of different things like, was he gonna bite me? or was he gonna run straight into me and knock me over.Well I didn't know what the dog was going to do.

I picked up a stick from the ground and held it out in front of me.I ran back to dad and grabbed onto his leg as tightly as I possibly could. I turned round to look at the pitbull... and there it was it was right there in front of my face with it's mouth wide open.I quickly whipped my face the other way so I couldn't see it's grotty teeth inside it's huge mouth.I was breathing very hard and could not stop thinking of what might happen next.I kept my eyes shut until dad said that the dog had gone.

So I opened my eyes and I saw that the owner of the dog was talking to my dad and the dog was on it's leash which was being held by it's owner.After that very terrifying experience I am now scared of dogs, especially pitbulls.

Free Writing

Phew that was a good game for our morning fitness it was a lot of running we had to do i was a defender all the time so i did'nt have to do as much running as the attackers. Oh!! I did'nt get into intermediate normal that sucks but i still have a fair chance of getting into there . If i still don't get into intermediate normal i will probably go to LAC.