The Art of describing

The wind blew. John got cold. - 'Rustle, rustle' as the leaves circled around Johns cold feet.The wind was getting stronger everytime John took a step on the cold, hard floor.He could feel ghostly fingers tickling his feet while John's goosebumps were coming out of his skin like he had never seen before.

By Nathalie
LC13 :)

My descriptive writing

HeLLo My name is ACIDIBLLY and I am a alien.I have slimy, goopy, green skin the same colour as my boogies,which is like a tree greenish colour.I have three eyes,my eye at the left side of my head is the eye I had bloodshot on when my someone had left a knife on the floor......... when SUDDENLY!!!! I stood on it and it flicked up through the air and landed straight in my eye.OUCHHHHHH!!!!!!! I shouted and screamed for the rest of the day.Anyway that was then.My middle eye is black and my right eye had turned orange when I was sleeping.It was just a really random moment.I have no feet so I get around with my slimy skin that smoothly slides across the floor and that's what makes me move.I have no freinds because the other aliens think that I'm very scary and I have no family either because I hatched out of a dry,hard piece of gloop so that's how I got my gloopy skin.I love to slide around in the sticky oozy mud.I only eat cheese because it's my favourite food and I also love to drink caterpillar guts with a little dash of lemon and cinnamon.I've got to go and have my cocraoach bath now.So enjoy the rest of your goopy day.or should I say gloopy day.BYE!!


By Nathalie
LC13

Autumn

'Rustle,rustle' as I hear the Autumn leaves blowing in the breezy wind.Red,orange,yellow and brown leaves falling gently onto the cold autumn's floor.'Crunch,crunch as I step onto the leaves.I can feel the leaves veins massaging the bottom of my feet as I walk through the forest. I pick up a leaf and rub it underneath my nose, it smells like lawn clippings.The leaf also has five fingers and it reminds me of snowflakes and the Canada flag.Lots of different leaves falling of the trees,some sharp with rigid bits at the end and some as smooth as silk.Some with holes in them were caterpillars have bitten into or even other bugs.Getting to the end of the forest I see a squirrel gnawing into it's nuts.

People of the silk road

The man living the terrible life in Afganistan.Old with wrinkles nobody to look after him and just one knife and that was the only prop he had besides one pair of pants,one t-shirt and one turban.Went to some kind of dangerous and lonley forest out of nowhere and shaved the skin off a grey possum and used it to keep himself warm.Has no house and just lives on the ground.

My cross country training.

WALT:DESCRIBE

GO!! shouts Mrs Kenyon shouts everyone sprints as hard as they can,I don't know why but they just do.I know they're going to get puffed straight away and that's because they're not pacing themselves.My goal for today is to pace myself and that's what i'm doing right now.Around the tree and down the big hill. WEEEEEEEEEE! I say as I run down the steep hill past the cone. Yes! I get to put a counter in the bucket that means i have done 1 lap.Now im on my 2nd lap.Still pacing myself I feel myself turning as red as a tomato.'PUFF PUFF PUFF' as I run my 3rd lap passing 16 people I run around the big tree again and I go onto my 4th lap.'STOPPPP' shouts Mrs Kenyon. Huh, finally. That was a good cross country run.

Mrs Walker the Jump jam instructor

WALT: describe with voice

' FIVE,FOUR,THREE,TWO,ONE BOOM as the stereo plays as loud as it can to tune the whole room with the energetic loud thunder birds music. 'High arms' Mrs Walker shouts at the top of her voice as she dances her head of while the sweat runs down her shiny tanned neck like a waterfall that had been stopped for 10 whole days.Come forward she says with expression using her hand gestures. At the end of her hands are sharp nails they are as sharp as a lions claws. Now it's my favourite part. Time for the disco move.'WOW look at her musceles she looks as strong as a gorilla.So thats Mrs Walker the Jump Jam instructor.

My sea adventure

‘Splash’ as I jump into the sparkling shimmering water. Now our underwater adventure begins. ‘OH LOOK’ there are some black and orange striped nemo fish.They are so beautiful. What’s that in the distance I can see something gold and sparkly shimmering on the oceon’s surface . I swim closer to take a good look. ‘Oh my gosh it’s a treasure box at the bottom of the golden glittery sand, and it’s already open. This so cool my heart is beating as fast as a cheetah running. I swim even closer to the treasure box and take out all of the shiny gold coins and all the valuable jewellery and take them with me while I explore the rest of the oceon. I put the the jewellery around my neck and around my wrist and carry on swimming. I see some pink furry anemones on the oceon ground. I think it’s about time I come out from the water now. So I swim to the surface of the water and hop out.'WOW' That was the best diving experience ever.