WALT: Write dialogue

"I'm having the last lollie!" I said excitedly.
" NO! I said I was going to have it first," My sister yelled.
" No I did," I yell back.
"Well I'm bigger and stronger than you which is why I should get the last lollie,"
" So it doesn't matter about that," My sister says.

Argument or debate

I can still remember the day my family and I were at Animates. Today mum had given my sister and me the opportunity to choose a pet. While we were walking down the aisle of pets we saw tweeting birds meowing cats and barking dogs. I knew this was going to be hard to choose. After hours of thinking my sister and I had chosen the pet was going to be a dog. But what breed of dog? Was it going to be tall,short,plump or skinny. Right at the end of the dog aisle, I had found a small golden retriever, but on the other side of the aisle my sister had found a very woolly, fluffy white furred poodle. But still I wanted the golden retriever. My sister and I were fighting over which one to get. In the end my sister and I didn't agree with each other so dad got to choose the pet. Dad chose two guinea pigs. They were both girls.One was as blackn as the night sky with sparkling green eyes, and the other one was brown with white patches. We really enjoyed the guinea pigs, but after three years of having them we gave them to our cousins.

Writing Moderation

Whoah Whoa! come on come on I can reach Mr Snuggles nearly there very nearly there come on come on I can do it oh no I cant.Woof woof I turn my head round and see Aunt Carolines dogs heading straight for the stool that I am standing on.My hands clenched tightly to the shelf of Aunt Carolines bookcase.The dogs still chasing each other and getting even closer to the stool, finally I feel a great huge THUD! and with all that shock my hands slip asI fall to the ground.I look up and this what I saw... very slowly one by one the books from the book shelf come tumbling down on me. AAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!! I scream closing my eyes as tightly as I possibly could.Once all of the books had landed on top of me I got up and I started crying.I had grazes and dents all over my body . That's the mark where the books had landed on me.OH! are you okay darling said Aunt Caroline as she picked me up and asked me what had happened.I told her the story and she gave me mr snuggles back and told me next time to ever climb shelves.So I listened and since then I have never climbed shelves again.

scary story

I was just happily walking along the Manawatu river with my mum, dad and little sister when suddenly a creamy,brown pitbull came out from nowhere and started running straight my way.

I was so terrified. I was thinking lots of different things like, was he gonna bite me? or was he gonna run straight into me and knock me over.Well I didn't know what the dog was going to do.

I picked up a stick from the ground and held it out in front of me.I ran back to dad and grabbed onto his leg as tightly as I possibly could. I turned round to look at the pitbull... and there it was it was right there in front of my face with it's mouth wide open.I quickly whipped my face the other way so I couldn't see it's grotty teeth inside it's huge mouth.I was breathing very hard and could not stop thinking of what might happen next.I kept my eyes shut until dad said that the dog had gone.

So I opened my eyes and I saw that the owner of the dog was talking to my dad and the dog was on it's leash which was being held by it's owner.After that very terrifying experience I am now scared of dogs, especially pitbulls.

Free Writing

Phew that was a good game for our morning fitness it was a lot of running we had to do i was a defender all the time so i did'nt have to do as much running as the attackers. Oh!! I did'nt get into intermediate normal that sucks but i still have a fair chance of getting into there . If i still don't get into intermediate normal i will probably go to LAC.

SHOWTIME!!!!!

W.A.L.T : put it all together

PLAN!!!

Had to get dressed quickly, was in such a rush, had no time to sit down, thought I had lost my things, was in a small squishy dressing room, the dressing room was all hot and very stuffy, we did'nt have to share a dressing room with the boys, I was panicking.

Writing!!!

OH NO!!! I've only got one song to get dressed and ready for Halloween and the dressing room is really hot and stuffy.

I quickly tug my hideous Halloween costume on and rush to the black silky wings were I could see people already lining up to go on stage. OK finally the dance is finished now I have to go and rush into my black box costume.

OK now I've got to take my sparkly sewed-on sequin headband off and find my hairbrush.OH NO!!!! where is my hairbrush????? I search through my bag.AH HA !!! found you . Now I've got to tie my hair up into a high ponytail.Where's my sequin hair tie??? PHEW!! I'm ready now.

I rush back downstairs and wait in the wings.PHEW!!! I'm just in time to dance.

W.A.L.T put it all together.

Bad weather in the weekends.

Brainstorming words : I couldn't go outside, I was bored, It was raining hard out, nothing to do, I sat down and read my book, The thunder was making my ears sore and hard for me to concentrate on my book,

My simille I'm going to use: as loud as a stampede of elephants rushing to get their breakfast.

I'M SOOOOO BORED!!!! The rain was pouring down really hard out.I was bored so I sat down to read my very interesting book.It was called geronimo stilton and the kingdom of fantasy.SUDDENLY..... BANG!!!!! What was that??? Oh it's just thunder. I went back to reading my book.By now the thunder was getting louder and louder it was as loud as a stampede of elephants rushing to get their breakfast.I stopped reading my book and stared out the window.On the road I had seen all the leaves and the flowers that had been washed away by the heavy rain.It was very deep.I put my raincoat on and walked downstairs to the garage and had seen that the water had flooded the garage.I saw soggy wet cardboard boxes and wet storage.I went over to the wall and I could see how high the wild water had gone.It was incredebly high!!!