Monday, November 29, 2010

WALT: Write dialogue

"I'm having the last lollie!" I said excitedly.
" NO! I said I was going to have it first," My sister yelled.
" No I did," I yell back.
"Well I'm bigger and stronger than you which is why I should get the last lollie,"
" So it doesn't matter about that," My sister says.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Nat!
    what you did well:) Chose a good piece of speech
    What you could do better next time:( Say who 'MY SISTER' is




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